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Old 10-28-2011, 11:43 PM
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i'm using my sister's computer since BEC power surge fucked up my faithful del with all my good shit, and all i could have done was take it's harddrive and shove it in another computer i have that can't get online. ain't life fucking grand.

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The Passenger/Visitor and his Wife are holding each other for dear life, even though they?re fighting
the urge to vomit. The Passenger/Visitor/Wife looks to her husband with tears in her eyes. But he
only kisses her head, and holds her with dear compassion and sadness.

Passenger/Visitor/Husband
?I love you, I?ve always loved you, and I?m sorry for convincing you to come here.?

His wife doesn?t respond but only looks into his blue grey eyes that looks green under the light,
and places her head down as she fights the overpowering nausea and terror. Her husband though
braves the fear and looks ahead at the thing standing before the Security officer. Though his wife is
there, just beneath him, the man throws up; the vomit literally traveling upwards towards the
Jitney?s top.

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The Security Officer knows not what is happening, and at this juncture, he doesn?t need to know.
Since, his suffering is imminent, and the way it shall occur will be most heinous. The Security Officer
looking towards the grotesquery that is Thetis, goes to speak, but, as his mouth goes ajar, to utter
a word, or perhaps a plea of mercy, or a call to his god, gods or goddesses; The Savage Thetis Is Upon
Him.
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INT ? OUTERWORLD - Jitney #10 ? Outside Conditions Ghostly

Some of the Passengers watches in horror as the macabre creature straddle the Security Officer
With its teeth embedded in the Officer?s gut. While others overcome with revulsion vomits profusely
as we
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The Guard has his eyes closed as he?s pushing with all of his might against the superhumanly
powerful Thetis. Her mouth tearing digging into his gut, ripping away muscle and meaty flesh and
fat, blood is spurting around the circular maw that is her mouth; the Officer coughs up blood and
screams. He tries to push her head away, but to no avail, she?s held fast, and her maw is jiggering like a
buzz saw deep into his intestines. Her body muscular and black with what could only be called veins and
roots running through her form. Her hair pulsing and moving like snakes, her eyes not typical slits of
something ghastly and evil, but wide and black; almost cuddly and inviting.

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EXT ? OUTERWORLD ?Outside Conditions Ghostly ? In the Heart of a Maelstrom

The #10 Jitney Is in the centre of a maelstrom of unnamable things, only the former
predominately green color has changed into a multicolored viscera
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INT ? OUTERWORLD ? Jitney #10 ? Outside Conditions Ghostly


The Passenger/Visitor who had just thrown up, watches in horror as the vomit he?s produced,
vanish like mist into the air above them. The Jitney though clearly somewhere else, still feels
as if it?s moving in a circle. There?re those that are praying, and others who are defecating.

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Thetis above the Security Officer, sucking the viscera from his abdomen, ignores the Officer?s
Gurgles and Gasp; he pleads and screams. Thetis pulls away, her mouth filled with a bit of small
Intestinal tubes, and mangled gore of all sorts, suddenly slithers her eyes in a grimace of pain.
She tries to stand up and away from the Black large Security Officer who is covered in viscera and
gore, blood and sweat, saliva and bile; his mouth ajar in a terrible Gurgle shrill, his eyes wide in terror.

Thetis
(Screaming in Pain, and what could only be shock or horror)
?WHAT IS THIS??
(A woman sitting not too far, and the lady next to her is sprayed with viscera)
?THEY?RE MINE, I EARNED THEM FAIR AND SQUARE, I EARNED THEM!?
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Thetis loses her new form, and is once more in her human female shape.

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EXT ? OUTERWORLD/Cable Beach Roundabout ? The Maelstrom/FOG ? Day?ish

The Maelstrom is giving way to the ghostly fog; with its many shapes and no ethereal forms,
the shriek of the Jitney is slowly being replaced by the ENGINE?S ROAR. We can almost see
The Big Rig Trailer and other signs of life at Cable Beach?s Roundabout.

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EXT ? Cable Beach Roundabout ? Scene of a Grisly Accident ? Day/Amidst a tornado

It?s been several moments since the Mercedes guy called for police, and a few more than
that since the guy from Car B called in to report the incident. Since they both called, two
units were sent, and by chance an Ambulance was summoned as well. Regardless of the
police who arrived, or the Ambulance that also came, nothing could have been done
for Mercedes guy or the driver of the truck who had rotted into a pile of human gore
goop.
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The Officer?s who arrived, were aghast at what they were seeing, and one of the Ambulance Drivers
fainted, the other picked up his partner, and quickly left, swearing he?d send someone else.
After the information concerning the Accident was shared, several emergency responders were on
their way, but observers couldn?t do much due to the suspicious windstorm, or the circling cloud
of fog or mist that kept passing around them. The skies looked almost clear, other than the wind
storm that suspiciously sat on the Roundabout, until, one of the police ventured to close to the rotating
cloud, and as it passed over him, he collapsed onto the pavement, convulsing, and as an ambulance
arrived not a moment too soon, Something Could be Seen Emerging From the Circling Fog.

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INT ? Jitney # 10? Outside Conditions Almost Normal/Day?ish

The Passenger/Visitor looks at her Husband, and both of them looks hopeful, they?re looking at the
other passengers, and those that notices the change, also shares the looks of hope. The Visitor
in elation cries out with joy, her husband weeping next to her with joy.

Passenger/Visitor/Wife
?It?s almost over, by God, it?s nearly done, and we?re free, free!?

Another passenger, a guy jumps up pointing to the former creature Thetis up front,

(to be continued)
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Passenger/Bahamian
?You try to take God people to hell you biatch, but Prayers stronger than Pussavy bey!?

Other Passengers join in, clapping, seemingly forgetting that a moment ago, they were else where
and this woman was once something else, eating away at a much larger man?s gut.

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Thetis turns away, in silence and is looking out the front of the Jitney, she then suddenly falls to her
Knees and holds onto the metal column near the door, as the world through the windows, melts into

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EXT ? Cable Beach Roundabout ? Day

The Wind storm is dying down, any remaining bits of Fog is dissipating; all that remains is one large
cloud continuing its orbit around the Roundabout, until, the Fog dissipates a bit more, revealing the
front of a jitney approaching the scene of the accident and the many emergency responders.
The officer who had passed through the cloud Is now on a stretcher, and he?s being loaded into an
Ambulance that?s about to be hit in the rear by the oncoming front of the Jitney, someone cries out.
The Jitney is coming on fast, what?s left of the fog is still assailing the Jitney?s sides.

(to be continued)
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INT ? Jitney # 10 ? Condition is between worlds

Everyone on board starts laughing with happiness, Until, they notice the Emergency Service Vehicle
Seemingly approaching them rather quickly, even though The Visitor and his Wife, knew immediately
It was them approaching it; they?d lost none of their momentum, The Visitor?s Wife Screams

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Thetis looks back towards the passengers with the look of fear and abstract hatred, She looks down
at the man she had chosen to consume first, and his eyes looked up at her with puzzlement and fear,
he was dying, or almost dead, Thetis didn?t know which condition he was suffering, and cared little
she did; all of her powers were seemingly go ne, and for the first time in her existence, she was naked
to Fate and the forces that plagued the lives of mortals daily. Had she broken some unknown rule?
She couldn?t have, she?d spent centuries carefully planning who were to be on this bus, and how
their flesh and imperative potentiality of existence would be bound to her sentience, making
her a true Deus Ex Machina, and a true master of the Machines of Fate, rather than a cog, like
how she had been all her life.

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INT ? Jitney #10 ? Bullet Time/Thetis? Mind?s Eye

The Jitney is getting closer and it?s a tenth of a second before the Bus strikes the rear of the EMS
(to be continued)
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vehicle, Thetis touches the wound she imposed upon the Security Guard, and she thanks
the Fates that she could still see someone?s history, and then she notices The Security Officer?s
History being altered, events changes and we see new histories, mainly timeless histories among these,
Learning about Thetis; a moment before his computer screen had porn, and a blip later, and it?s all of
Thetis? history, including the would be victims? history who resides presently on the Jitney, Thetis sees
this, and is so shocked she pulls away just as the Jitney collides.

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Everyone on the Jitney colliding in bullet time, being tossed about, all of them at once launching forward

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EXT ? Cable Beach Roundabout ? Scene of the Accident

The front of the Jitney collides with the EMS vehicle just as the Police Officer?s Gurney is placed inside,
the EMS worker who quickly closes the door is immediately crushed, and there is an explosion of air,
that knocks everyone down. As people finds their feet, only the front of the Jitney can be seen, the
rest of it is gone,

EXT/INT ? Cable Beach Roundabout ? Jitney # 10 front of Bus

(to be continued)

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As curious onlookers make their way pass police caution tape, they?re exposed to a curious scene
of a Jitney?s front only, with three passengers, two unconscious, and another with his guts torn out.
The woman, a white lady, is covered in blood, and she has bits of blood and gore in her mouth,
another man has his eyes open, but he?s unresponsive. An EMS responder has been crushed, and
a police officer is in the damaged EMS vehicle, with bits of his flesh rotting off. A driver of a Grey
Mercedes has been pulverized beneath the wheels of a Big Rig Trailer, and the driver looks as if he
has been dead for many days, as bits of his rotting goop, pours from the open truck door, the hinges
and the rest of it looks rusted and old, even though the truck is only a few months old.

(Prologue Ends)
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How about the part where "Old Ben" assfucks Leia, and blows it on her fucking cheek? He knew damn well who she was, but seemingly ignores it.:
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