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part two to the above, i guess, it's not finished, and it probably only will after your wife, or mom sends me their knickers.

GUNMAN

BY ExpletiveBMP aka JDB


EXT ? EAST WEST Highway Carriage Way ? Night

Three cars approaches shell gas station, and enters the station to get gas, with four occupants,
all drivers for each vehicle exits. They?re dressed differently; one is wearing a Suit, the other
shorts, sandals and T ? shirt, and the Last has a female passenger, he?s driving a sports car, and
he?s wearing a Lakers Jersey with jeans and flip flops.

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INT ? Shell Gas Station East West Highway ? Night

The Three Drivers all go to the Cashier to pay for their fuel, before them and behind them are other
customers, and to the casual observer there are no relations between the three.

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EX ? Shell Gas Station East West Highway ? Night

(to be continued)

(continue)

One of the cars driven by one of the drivers has some one in the trunk, as the attendant puts gas in
the car with the person, he could feel the motion, and hear noises from the trunk, but, he does
nothing and continue to put the fuel in the vehicle. The owner of the vehicle, emerges from the
station.

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The owner of the car with the trunk passenger, the guy in the coat suit, emerges. He?s well
shaven, and has a cross around his neck. To a casual observer, he looks like a church goer,
even though, he?s anything but. The cars of his cohorts have the attendants wiping the glass.
The guy who did his car, has already moved on, and not cleaned the glass. This gives suit
guy pause. But he says nothing, enters his car and leaves. The other guys each with bags
emerges, and one heads down Sir Milo Butler Highway, the other with the female passenger
heads further west along Harold Road.

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INT ? Back Trunk of Suit Guy ? Night

The innards of Suit Guy?s trunk Is near pitch black, other than the back reflect from the Tail
Lights. We see someone clearly bound, and they have a bit of tubing taped into their mouth.
Their eyes is wide with terror, and they?re crying

(to be continued)
(continue)

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EXT ? Sir Milo Butler Highway ? Suit Guy?s Car ? Night

We?re watching Suit Guy, as if we?re a passenger in an adjacent vehicle, and we?re
seeing him from his driver?s side. He?s singing gospel tunes, and the song, ?City
Of Gold? is playing, and he?s signing along.

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INT ? Suit Guy?s Car ? Night

Suit Guy is still singing along, his bible is open, and its innards has a powerful handgun, as Suit
Guy sings he taps his gun.

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EXT ? Cable Beach Dual Carriage Way ? Night

Laker?s Jersey Guy and His Female Passenger is heading Further West, the young lady has
Her Legs up on the dash board, the guy is talking to her, music blaring, it?s Vybes Kartel
And Marital ?My Money Money?, he has a cigar in his mouth, and she?s smoking a cigarette.
(to be continued)
(continued)

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EXT ? Sir Milo Butler Highway ? Guy in shorts and T-shirt

Guy in Shorts is Blaring Kardinal Offishal?s ?Nina? as he eats a chocolate bar. He?s also singing
along to the song, a police car passes him.

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INT ? Suit Guy?s Trunk ? Night

The Occupant of the trunk is shaking about; we can make them out as much as we did earlier,
as the vehicle comes to A STOP. We hear them noticeably moan loudly. Gospel music can be
heard. As we

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EXT ? Some Where Out West ? Night

Suit Guy, Marcus Dames, is outside his vehicle and is singing and clapping to gospel, his cross glistening
In the moon light, his bible in hand, as a Car approaches with its headlights off. He turns to it,
as if he knows the engine well enough. He holds his bible high, and gives a spirited performance.

(to be continued)
(continue)

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INT ? Sports Car of Jersey Shirt Guy ? Night

Jersey Shirt Guy, Harold Joseph, with Cigar in mouth, giggles lady like when he sees Marcus? spirited
performance. Daphne Hues , the passenger, reaches over and pulls on Harold?s genitalia.

Harold Joseph
(giggling a bit too lively)
?Stop it girl, you so fool eh, keep that up and you?ll be in trouble.?

Daphne Hues, does it again, and Harold does the Pillsbury dough boy giggle.

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EXT ? Some Where Out West ? Night

T- Shirt Guy arrives, his lights is on, the head lights hits Marcus Dames causing him to stop his spirited
jig.

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(to be continued)
(continue)

Marcus Dames jumps into the shadows, twirling about like a mad man shouting mock praises; his
performance even more spirited. Twirling and pretending to be under the spirit, Marcus Dames
the thespian, and natural sadist, born without the ideological main that controls all of us, twirls.
Emerging from the Shadows Marcus Dames points at the offending vehicle, dropping his bible to the
ground, he with the air of a performer, spouts dramatically

Marcus Dames
?Get behind me Satan!?
(Then lacking his accented thespian air)
?I mean now *****, ?ass outta ya car,? We got us a ***** to torture!?

Marcus Dames takes off his coat, revealing a leather vest filled with blades and pliers, and pin
nosed hammers. They?re knitting pins, and alcohol, and a hack saw blade and razors, tampons,
and band aids, gauze and rubbing alcohol. Then approaching the car with Daphne and Harold


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EXT ? Some Where Out West ? Just outside Harold?s Driver?s side ? Night

Marcus lowers himself, placing his arms on Daphne?s side of the window, We can see him through
Harold?s side of the car, and Daphne is looking up at him, and Harold is looking his way grinning.
(to be continued)
(continue)

Marcus Dames
?Don?t be smiling wit me you The Gays, you?re supposed to be F****ING.?

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INT ? Sports Car ? Night

Harold Joseph has a broad grin on his face, and Daphne Hues rolls her eyes sheepishly. Both of them
are gay, but why they?re here to have sex, isn?t immediately clear. Daphne Hues removes her letter
from the glove compartment and hands another letter that?s addressed to ?Laker?s Jersey Guy?to
Harold. Daphne opens the letter, and after reading it over, she hands Harold her copy, who gives her
his.

Daphne Hues
?Whose to say we haven?t had sex already??

Harold Joseph and Daphne Hues smiles up at their boss Marcus Dames; in any other setting they?d all
look like long time friends; regular people, meeting for a casual chat---they may be friendly,
but each of them are as comely as vipers, and their temperament, equally as vile.

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(to be continued)
(continue)

EXT ? Somewhere Out West ? Just outside Harold?s Driver side ? Night

Marcus Dames? smile broadens then ceases.

Marcus Dames
?The guy?s whose paying you two 3 grand each says you haven?t, you also agreed to not use condoms.?
(His smiles returns)
?So have at it Daphne, or would you like for me to warm you up first??

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INT ? Sports Car ? Night

Harold Joseph
(looking mischievous)
?Could you warm me up please boss??

Daphne?s eyes become slits as if she?s holding in an explosive fart.

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EXT ? Some Where Out West ? Just Outside?s Harold?s Driver?s side ? Night
(to be continued)
(continue)

Marcus Dames
(his smile has melted into a grimace)
?F*** You F*****!?

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INT ? Sports Car ? Night

Daphne Erupts in Laughter, and Harold sticks out his tongue at his boss, then turning away from her
boss, Daphne cover?s Harold?s mouth with hers.

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EXT ? Somewhere Out West ? Night

Marcus Dames pushes away from the Sports Car, as the occupants starts shaking the vehicle doing
whatever, Marcus has a look of disgust on his face, as Stevie Cobb, T ? shirt Guy approaches,
in his short pants. He?s looking at the commotion in the car, and sees his boss walking away from it.

Marcus Dames
?F***ING F*****S!? (turning away from Stevie Cobb, and signaling him to follow) ?Let?s Go Stevie!?

(to be continued)
(continue)

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INT ? Marcus Dames? car trunk ? Night

Our victim sweating profusely can be seen due to the light filtering through the car trunk, from
Stevie Cobb?s car, and just then, the trunk opens and our victims shrills through the tubing in HER
mouth.

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EXT ? Some Where Out West ? Night

Marcus Dames and Stevie Cobb look down at our victim menacingly, as her shrills can be heard,
and with that she breaks wind. Both men smiles broadly.

Marcus Dames
?Did she just fart boss??

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INT/EXT ? Somewhere Out West ? Marcus Dames? car trunk ? Night
(to be continued)
(continue)

Thetis nymph of the sea looks at her captors with a look of absolute terror. Almost a year to the
day ago, Thetis using her reality bending abilities, sought to feed upon humans that would graduate
her essence from a cog of fate, to an actual Deus Ex Machina. But, unknowingly she broke a hidden
clause, and as a result, failed. She was taken to Doctor?s Hospital to recover after her accident at
Cable Beach?s Roundabout. Whilst there, feigning a coma, she sought to use the last of her reality
bending abilities and change her form and relative existence. Her victim, Stacy Wilson from
Connecticut, was visiting Nassau, but, she was injured due to a windstorm on West Bay Street.
Thetis, with the last visage of her strength, created a pocket of time, just long enough for her
to fall upon Stacy Wilson, paralyzing her, and then systematically eating her skin and underlying
flesh; her powers didn?t have enough time to reconstitute itself, and due to her mimicry attempt,
ALL VISAGES Of SELF VANISHED. Her cog abilities tied into an objects? fate, allowed her to see and know
intimately all moments and secrets of Stacy Wilson, but, once her memories were gone, foR all intents
and purposes, she became Stacy Wilson. The pocket of time closed, sealing the slowly dying
American girl in a forever lost pocket of space time, in a state of gradual death, and infinite agony due
to the skin and flesh ripped from her body; paralyzed unable to scream, forever aware, forever
suffering. Thetis/Stacy Wilson is oblivious of her true nature, and returns a year later to Nassau.

THETIS/ STACY WILSON is in agony, and to anyone else, seeing her in such misery, would move them
to allow her whatever grace necessary to quell her suffering. Anyone else who wasn?t sociopathic,
or anyone who wasn?t Marcus Dames and Stevie Cobb. As she?s looking up, we see her eyes clearly due
to Stevie car?s headlights. Her eyes are blood shot, and her face is covered with tears and sweat, her
nose is running profusely with snot, and she?s blowing bubbles of saliva through the hose in her mouth.
(to be continued)
(continue)

Out Of Shot, we hear Marcus Dames? voice, as we keep Stacy Wilson in view.

Marcus Dames
(out of shot)
?Yes she has, and we haven?t broken or stabbed anything yet. She?s gonna poop soon.?

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EXT ? Somewhere out West ? Night

TWO SHOT of Stevie Cobb addressing Marcus Dames; they have the Grinch?s grin.

Stevie Cobb
?Damn, den what, she gon piss eh??

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MEDIUM SHOT of Marcus Dames

Marcus Dames
?You ain?t smell that, she piss already bey.?

(to be continued)
(continue)

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MEDIUM SHOT of Stevie Cobb, lifting his eyebrows a bit.

Stevie Cobb
?What, already, aawwww boy dis gon be fun!?

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TWO SHOT of Marcus Dames and Stevie Cobb turning to face their query in the Car?s trunk.

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INT/EXT ? Somewhere out West ? Marcus Dames? Car Trunk - Night

CLOSE UP of Stacy Wilson looking even more petrified, eyes darting between the two men, as she
shrills and shrieks even louder through the tubing as we

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EXT ? Somewhere out West ? Night
to be continued)
(continue)

TWO SHOT of Marcus Dames and Stevie Cobb looking down at Stacy, her shrieks
are even more pronounced OUT OF SHOT as they reach out to grab her, HER
SHRILL ECHOES as our SCREEN

GOES BLACK:

FROM THE BLACK WE HEAR---
Marcus Dames ( V.O. )
?Hold her F***ING Down Bey!?

There are sounds of a struggle, rustling of clothing, shoveling of dirt with feet, and of course

Stacy Wilson ( V.O. )
(Stacy is screaming through THE TUBE IN HER MOUTH, especially when we hear a ?Guk? sound)

Stevie Cobb ( V.O. )
?SHE FIGHTING ME YA Kno? MU BEY!?

Marcus Dames ( V.O. )
?Of course she gon fight bey, ?cause I hitting her shin bone wit mu pin hammer, now hold this skank!?

We hear Stacy Wilson shrill again, and Then we hear a ?bump? sound and Marcus cry out
(to be continued)
(continue)

Stevie Cobb ( V.O. )
?See, she kick you in your face, bey, I can?t hold her upper body and her legs!?

Marcus Dames ( V.O. )
?Hold this F***ING B****?S legs bey! I GON STOP HER $#!+ RIGHT F***ING NAW!?

We then HEAR a ?WUBUP? sound then we hear the sound of Stacy?s shrill changing as if a car is
Changing its gear.

Marcus Dames ( V.O. )
?YOU WAN (WUBUP!) PLAY WIT SERIOUS (WUBUP!) MAN (WUBUP!)? Take Blow (WUBUP!),
Take Blow (WUBUP!)!?

FADE IN:

EXT ? Somewhere Out West ? Night

THREE SHOT Marcus Dames is over Stacy Wilson?s mid section, pounding her face into the ground, while
Stevie Cobb is holding her legs, intentionally shoving his face into her groin area. Each Time
We Hear, YA BIATCH, Marcus Dames punches her again.


(To be continued)
(continue)

Marcus Dames
?Ya Biatch! Ya BiaTch! Ya BiaTch!?

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An ANGLE SHOT of Marcus Dame standing over Stacy Wilson, looking down aT her.

Marcus Dames
?See what ya made mE do, now ya pretty face all F***ED UP!?

Stacy?s face is a mess; her nose is clearly broken, and her face is bleeding profusely.
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How about the part where "Old Ben" assfucks Leia, and blows it on her fucking cheek? He knew damn well who she was, but seemingly ignores it.:
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